Given are two diagrams highlighting the steps and machinery employed in making cement as well as the production of concrete for construction purposes.
Overall, it is clearly evident that, the manufacture of cement entails five main stages; beginning with raw materials and ending with packaging in bags. Producing concrete however, involves virtually two-step approach with only four ingredients.
Regarding the making of cement, firstly, limestone and sand as raw materials are formed into powder through a crusher. After this, the powder then passes through a mixer to be flamed in a rotating heater. Once heated, the resultant product is grinned in order to finally achieve cement, which are then packaged into bags and transported to construction sites.
Moving on to how concrete is produced, 15% part of cement, a tenth of water, a quarter sand and half proportion of gravel are needed. All of these are added together in a cylindrical drum to whirl around until concrete is attained.
- The line graph below in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012 64
- The bar graph indicates sales figures for reading materials from 2002 to 2012.Write a report to a university lecturer describing the information shown below.Write at least 150 words 73
- Some countries encourage teenagers to have a part time job to see it is a good thing, while others disagree.Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 78
- The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. 78
- The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six computer science subjects at a US university in 2011.Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, regarding, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29559748428 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78280388609 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660377358491 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7765639132 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.25 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 5.23603664747 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195558944696 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077790208757 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646127320963 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119342058359 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608148364834 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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