Pirouettes Ballet School is the clear choice for any child. Of all the dance schools in Elmtown, Pirouettes has the most intensive program, and our teachers have danced in the most prestigious ballet companies all over the world. Many of our students have gone on to become professional dancers with top dance companies
Having to carry an esteemed reputation in Elmtown, i would to confirm a few peripherals :
Where does Pirouettes Ballet School stand as compared to its counterparts and in neighboring towns, there might be many teachers from prestigious ballet companies.
However, are the teachers sought after by students; there is a subtle difference between being erudite as compared to possessing the art of teaching --imparting/sharing the inherited knowledge to their disciples.
Are the programs widely advertised well versed--curated with the individual abilities of their students or a conscript mandated to follow.
We also like you to establish the student:teacher ratio, to shed light on the importance that any fledgling would get receive in the class to cultivate there abilities and embark their true potential making a congenial environment.
Also, is there a determinate information which would help the aspiring student to extrapolate their chances of being hired/placed in Dream companies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.6327345309 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 13.6137724551 22% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 28.8173652695 31% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 55.5748502994 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 16.3942115768 30% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 2260.96107784 38% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 149.0 441.139720559 34% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74496644295 5.12650576532 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 4.56307096286 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38858213548 2.78398813304 122% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 204.123752495 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.711409395973 0.468620217663 152% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 705.55239521 36% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 19.7664670659 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.8473053892 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.400862061 57.8364921388 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.2 119.503703932 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8 23.324526521 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.70786347227 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145072300996 0.218282227539 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673843957043 0.0743258471296 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817989926139 0.0701772020484 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666988698311 0.128457276422 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702398255219 0.0628817314937 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 14.3799401198 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 48.3550499002 69% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.1628742515 181% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.197005988 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 12.5979740519 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.32208582834 128% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 98.500998004 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 12.3882235529 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.1389221557 122% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.9071856287 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.