You have a facebook friend living in country and he/she is curious to learn abt a major news items in your country.Write a letter to your facebook friend. In your letter1.Describe a news story in your country2.Explain why people are interested in it3.Say

Dear Mike,

Trust all good at your end. Life here was too busy with work and family. I saw your message on facebook about your question on big news on air now in India and i am more happy to share you details on it.

As you know, the new government has completed under the successful leadership of Prime Minister Mr. Modi and my fellow citizens has lot of expectations on Prime Minister since he promised to remove corruption and bring black money to India. There are various measures has taken by ruling government including the major announcement officially released yesterday to demonetize the 500 and 1000 rupees old notes. This is a trending news today and highly debated on media because there are some speculations spread out by oppositions parties.

This news is very important for citizens of India as its expected to increase the India economy by 10% and GDP 15%. In addition to that, Reserve bank of India also advised the citizens to deposit the black money into their account before the deadline.Although the executions steps are not very clear to public, i hope government will soon release press note to clarify the situation. This means people are little worried about the action taken and queueing up in ATM, bank for withdrawals.

I hope this clears your doubt and give me your opinion on this. Awaiting to hear from you soon.

Regards,

Ananth

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
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Suggestion: Although
... into their account before the deadline.Although the executions steps are not very clear...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...ons steps are not very clear to public, i hope government will soon release press...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, as to, in addition, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 236.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85169491525 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57781440733 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 106.607317073 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665254237288 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.3277207015 43.030603864 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.090909091 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172175287129 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588420917884 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759410006675 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119501859065 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878327083638 0.0819641961636 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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