Write about the following topic:
•The television is good for you.
•Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of watching television.
It is irrefutable, there are plethora of people who are really using television to get more knowledge and they can easily get the news what is happening around in the world. However, some people are encountering that there are some disadvantages, while look TV consistently. Here I will discuss about the advantages and we will encounter the problems by using television.
To begin with, In this modern era, technology has improved lot and people are getting more expectation to watch tv programmes, generally, mathematical, science and quiz competition programmes which are highlighted and increasing total count day by day for this programmes. In addition to this, national geographic channel whose most number of people watching this channel to understand about wild animals life. Also, some channels that we can look around brain games, people are getting mesmerised about this programs on TV. For Instance, In India, TV channels only earning 12% margin increasing every year this will indicate that how people are utilising television.
On the other side, above mentioned advantages outweighed by some disadvantages, people are getting addicted to some of the serials. Media persons has to increase the TRP rate to get survey in current market, in order to this , they are always showing some unimaginably programmes. Also, they are highlighting some crimes programs because of that youth persons try to involve some crime as a result juvenile persons increasing day by day. Nowadays, homo sapiens are liking heroism in order to watch movies on television and they are trying to apply on their real life and finally , they are encountering a plethora of issues on their life.
To conclude this, there are good programmes are available and parents responsibilities to allow their children and adults to watch only good programmes. Also, government responsibilities to be band whoever television is showing crimes and unimaginable fictions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'watch'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, look, really, so, while, as to, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35504885993 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98459087652 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537459283388 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8350528636 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.461538462 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134297629188 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528736588736 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486913198331 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882025072711 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029648348077 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.