The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.

Submitted by xenocide on Mon, 09/24/2018 - 16:54

The two pie charts demonstrate the proportion of budget sources and spending of a charity in America in a year.

It is obvious from the data that the most income receives from Donated Food while Program Services are the top of expenditures.

More than three quarter of budget, in fact 86.6%, earns money from Donated Food. The income from government is equal to from investment at 0.2% and this percentage is the least proportion of all sources. The revenue from Community Contributions, at 10.4%, is 8 times less than that of Donated Food, but it is the second ranks of budget. The 2.2% of revenue sources receives from Program Revenue and other income of the charity is twice the lowest budget sources. The total of incomes of the charity in one year accounts for about 53.5 million dollars.

The most remarkable feature of expenditures chart is that almost all of spending uses for Program Services at 95.8%, whereas the rest of expenditures are spent for Fundraising at 2.6% as well as the 1.6% for Management and General. All of charity expenditures is about 53.2 million dollars.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 338, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
..., but it is the second ranks of budget. The 2.2% of revenue sources receives from P...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ity is twice the lowest budget sources. The total of incomes of the charity in one ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...unts for about 53.5 million dollars. The most remarkable feature of expenditures...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, so, well, whereas, while, in fact, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88709677419 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65502684239 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52688172043 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0531094378 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129015637687 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586008132021 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347357568686 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824782761955 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377521268259 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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