A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social legal contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his/her own labor.
Crime seems to be widespread in this modern era and it is absolutely impposible to eschew it completely. Crime has been classified into many types. Crime can be sexual crime, assasination, robbery, Terrorist crime etc. Disparate Crime has its implications on the society in different levels. A person commits a crime in regards to his/her personal satisfaction and personal needs and amenities without any clemency to the society. The person undergoing a crime should undergo punitive condemnation such as that he should not retain any civil rights inorder to preclude the further crime.
The person commits a crime not only because he is not able to satisfy his personal satisfaction/personal needs but he is vindictive and spiteful to the society because of the negative impacts that society has imposed on it. For instance, Many youths are joining the terrorist organisation with their own personal penchant for it. This needs to analysed and evaluated as the youths are joining the terrorist organisation not because lack of money and resources but because of their personal problems they have confronted in their life before.Thus, the crimes such as terrorist crimes are spiteful and unrelenting vendetta. The persons involving in such crimes should be deprived of the civil rights as this will be conducive to the society welfare and harmony.
However, there are crimes such as robbery in which the person involves in crime for pecuniary things and he is indifference to morality of the society. These crimes are spontaneous and their indifference to work for other jobs. They are greedy and have a abject avarice to procure the money in some manner such as stealing in the houses, murdering people to obtain the wealth etc. These people are not considered terrorists and they are distinguishable from terrorist procedures. Nonetheless, they should also be punished severely and should be deprived of the basic civil rights or right to benefit from his/her labor to maintain the society to be serene and in the sheer proprietary.
Thus, the crimes may be classified in numerous ways. However, they affect the society abysmally with a big impact. These crimes will accelerate if kept untreated. So, the people committing a crime knowingly should be deprived of the civil rights and should not be retained to obtain the perquisites from his/her own labor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...me has been classified into many types. Crime can be sexual crime, assasination, robb...
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Line 1, column 318, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...ferent levels. A person commits a crime in regards to his/her personal satisfaction and perso...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...inorder to preclude the further crime. The person commits a crime not only beca...
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Line 3, column 542, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...ey have confronted in their life before.Thus, the crimes such as terrorist crimes ar...
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Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...or other jobs. They are greedy and have a abject avarice to procure the money in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, thus, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1988.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 383.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19060052219 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89047740018 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454308093995 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.9 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7362858342 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.631578947 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1578947368 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84210526316 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 10.2758426966 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 5.13820224719 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345837888852 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11077871634 0.0831039109588 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115646536661 0.0758088955206 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246306205187 0.150359130593 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577316167307 0.0667264976115 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.