Topic - Parents are busy nowadays and they are not able to give time to their children. So they are becoming indisciplined and careless. What do you think are the main factors behind this? What remedial actions can be taken by the parents??
Parents are working round the clock to meet both ends.As a result,they are unable to devote required time to their progeny, which in turn make children rebellious and defiant.This essay shall probe into causes along with the solutions of this tribulation.
The prime reason pertinent to this issue is the unavailability of the parents to imbibe moral values in their offsprings.They are engaged in earning green pastures up to the extent that they do not have sufficient time to spend with their children.As a consequence offsprings become headstrong as they do not know how to respect the elders and face behavioral issues.To illustrate, children,nowadays, hardly interact with guest at their home or greet their elders as these values are not being inculcated in them by their parents.
The another significant factor of this concern is the excessive use of gizmos by progeny and the parents.Despite the long working hours , instead of spending the spare time with children parents also prefer to be engaged with technological gadgets either for working or entertainment purpose. Even they also allow their offsprings to be busy with technology so that they do not disturb their parents.It is commonly seen,now,in free time both mother and father are busy on their mobile phones or laptops rather than interacting with their child this tendency definitely put deplorable effects on growth of a child.
Nonetheless, this problem is not insurmountable so effective measures can be taken to eradicate this issue.Firstly, parents should work on alternative shifts to make sure that at least one adult should remain with children, so that a child should not feel isolated and when he or she is accompanied by one of his parents it is easier to instill positive habits and ethics in him or her. In addition to this, parents must monitor activities of their offsprings time to time to know about what sort of friends they are having and in which activities their children are interested in.It also assists parents to know their children deeply and making their bond more stronger.
To put it briefly,admittedly birth givers work 24*7 to accomplish needs of their family, but they should not overlook their first responsibility about taking care of their child due to their prior commitments.
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, firstly, if, look, nonetheless, so, still, at least, in addition, sort of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18817204301 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98771885042 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556451612903 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.7583442861 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 275.714285714 106.682146367 258% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.1428571429 20.7667163134 256% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.1428571429 7.06120827912 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338045546979 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165864677821 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054714720384 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190257401443 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652252897304 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.6 13.0946893788 226% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.71 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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