The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.

The bar chart compares the amount of free time spent by two sexes in terms of employment status between 1998 and 1999. It is evident that the unemployed and retired spent more time for leisure activities than the remaining three groups. Besides, the hours of leisure time enjoyed by males are higher than that of females with a notable exception of the employed full time and housewives.
Males who were unemployed and retired spent roughly 85 hours on leisure activities, which are twice as much as that of males working full time. In contrast, no figure was recorded for males in employed-part-time and housewives group.
From 1998 to 1999, nearly 76 hours of leisure time went on females in unemployment and retirement. Additionally, approximately 40 hours were recorded in the group of women working full time. The employed part time and housewives witnessed a domination of women in hours of leisure time with 40 and 43 hours respectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: fulltime
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... twice as much as that of males working full time. In contrast, no figure was recorded fo...
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... recorded in the group of women working full time. The employed part time and housewives ...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...f women working full time. The employed part time and housewives witnessed a domination o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00632911392 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88913478809 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544303797468 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.5953554034 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.875 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281877071921 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135289671778 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623768757414 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197259350376 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767841962295 0.0819641961636 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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