Electricity demand in England during winter and summer
The line graph presents data on the electricity demand in England during winter and summer, while the bar chart shows the electricity usage in average home in England. It will be noticed that electricity consumption is higher than in summer, and heating room and heating water are the biggest electricity usage.
During winter, electricity demand fluctuates wildly with 30,000 being the lowest usage at approximately 8 am and the highest rate being at over 40,00 units between 21 pm and 24 pm. In summer, by contrast, there is relatively more stable power consumption and lower than in winter. The highest rate is about 20,000 at 13.00, while 12,000 units of electricity are the lowest at 9 am.
Electricity usage is mainly used for heating rooms and water with 52.5 %, followed by usage of ovens, kettles, and washing machines by 17 %. The least power usage is in vacuum cleaners, food mixtures, and electric tools, which slightly lower power utilization than lighting, TV, and radio with 16 %.
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It will be noticed that electricity consumption is higher than in summer,
It will be noticed that electricity consumption in winter is higher than that in summer,
there is relatively more stable power consumption
there is a relatively more stable power consumption
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