First of all, moving is inevitable these days as the majority of people want to pursue post-secondary education in developed countries such as the United States of America, Canada, Australia and much more. This is because it will lead them to get better employment and learn a new culture. For instance, many colleagues desire to acquire their post-secondary education in the United States of America which is also a dream for many youngsters. America is the center of attention for educational purpose as they have many institutions that are well recognized all over the world. Therefore, people immigrate to such well-developed countries and they are in desperate need of making friends for the moral support. In such a situation, friends that have the same interest and in proximity brings an immense sense of security when residing in a foreign country. For instance, when I immigrated to Canada which is a foreign country to me at that time, I was unsure about many things such as how to take transit, shopping and where to find a restaurant in an entirely new environment. However, I was so thankful that many students in the neighborhood that were also going to the same institution as me. Hence, we all carpooled to the university together. As a result, our friendship grew and strengthened day by day. I cannot imagine a university life without these friends that supported me morally in times of loneliness.
Secondly, making new acquaintance also brings the new value of knowing other people culture and add on to life experience which cannot be obtained by any means. Again, my own experience is a compelling situation of this. While I was doing my graduate studies in education, I had a chance to meet multitudes of people from various cultural backgrounds. We often had international cultural meetings at the campus, where I met many people that were interested in my cultural background as well. As a result, we exchanged our customs and traditions week by week. As a result, while sharing our cultural practices, a small group of friendship evolved. In addition to that, just by interacting with them in the international cultural meeting, I was able to make many new friends that brought so many valuable cultural practices with them.
In conclusion, it is more important to make new friends for moral support and to learn about various cultural background in a detailed manner.
- TPO-42 - Integrated Writing Task 68
- TPO 54- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. 73
- It is more important to keep your old friends than to make new friends. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- TOEFL TPO 32 - Integrated Writing Task 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a detailed manner" with adverb for "detailed"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...learn about various cultural background in a detailed manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2001.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99002493766 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96683282338 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518703241895 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6367836645 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.315789474 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1052631579 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47368421053 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128519836695 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397334762367 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06132602928 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132806692241 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083410230111 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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