A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give contact details for when you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties
Dear Elly,
Hope you are doing well. I want to thank you for consenting to look after my house; my pet, Tommy for a few days. I am writing this letter to walk you through some important points before I leave.
To begin with, you can buzz me anytime at my concern number at 1234567856. You can leave a voicemail, if am not available, I will call you back.
Furthermore, please feed Tommy twice a day. I have kept his food on the top shelf right above the kitchen sink. Also, he needs to be taken out for a stroll in the morning; and evening time. Tommy is a friendly dog; he is acquainted with you. So, I think
Finally, it would be great if you could water the plants every other day. Besides, unplug electronic appliances and turn off the water source each night.
I have packed the refrigerator with food for you. The house is all there for you to enjoy.
Once again I appreciate your help; I am looking forward to meeting you soon.
Best Regards,
Kirti
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...am not available, I will call you back. Furthermore, please feed Tommy twice a d...
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Line 4, column 254, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...; he is acquainted with you. So, I think Finally, it would be great if you could ...
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Line 9, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... meeting you soon. Best Regards, Kirti
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, furthermore, if, look, so, well, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38333333333 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3162003261 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688888888889 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.3301636874 44.8134815571 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.6 76.5299724578 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248550190719 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739826838254 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629397331088 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122007887054 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618118578677 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 8.37731958763 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.25 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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