The table below shows the numbers of people in each age group working in certain sectors in the UK in 1998 and 2006.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table illustrates the number of the people with different age group in UK, according to their occupation, in the year 1998 and the year 2006.
As clearly seen that, in 1998 hotel and catering was the number one working sector in age group 18-25 with 25,764 people, in same sector in 2006, 18,998 people accounted which was near as the 26-35 age group. Moreover, in 1998 building sector was powerfull in 18-25 age group, with 112,565 people belong in these, whereas in 2006 in same sector there were 86,430 people were accounted.
Furthermore, technology sector was most favourite in the year of 2006 in the age group of 26-35 with 454,357 people, in other hand 2006 people was less predilected towards this occupation, in 26-53 age group almost 63,339 people are accounted. Education sector was most favorite in 1998 in 46-55 age group people with 125,345 people, which was near as 36-45 age group people in year of 2006.
Overall, Technology sector was the most favourite amon all age group and there was lot of people are intrested in this sector. Whereas in 1998 people are most worked in building sector but in 2006 numbers of people were decreased.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.835 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30095089039 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.8225526325 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.142857143 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5714285714 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29459115862 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193812319049 0.103423049105 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396626274665 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227346054441 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151103632473 0.0819641961636 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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