There are several people with several thought and interest and talking about travelling or enjoying holidays many have their own thoughts. Some may feel good spending time on a resort where everything is managed and some may have interest travelling to different countries and know all the custom, tradition and cuisine. In my opinion I think everyone have different choice so both are best accourding to the peoples interest.
Spending time in managed resort is a good option because since we have spend all our time working and doing many stuff. Person may feel tired so spending time in managed resort may lead to a relaxed and peacefull time. They may have quality of time enjoying and forgetting all their stress. Similarly, they will be able to get a quality of time remembering all the good things they have done in their life.
However, beside spending whole time in resort some are interested to travel different countries knowing different culture and tradition. They can also learn new thing beside only of enjoying. For instance people visit countries like Nepal,india,Africa to see the lifestyle of the people and also to explore the natural beauty. Travelling may also lead to get knowledge about different thing. Also people will leran to adjust with the situationa and travelling to other countries also make them confidend about life.
To conclude, I believe everyone have their own thought about how to enjoy their holidays. So people should not listen what should they do. I believe we should do the things where we are comfortable and where we feel happy.
- The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.Cambridge 6 test 1 task 1 78
- The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.Cambridge 6 test 1 task 1 78
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. 73
- Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s actions. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading. 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thought seems to be countable; consider using: 'several thoughts'.
Suggestion: several thoughts
There are several people with several thought and interest and talking about travelli...
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Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'feels'.
Suggestion: feels
... many have their own thoughts. Some may feel good spending time on a resort where ev...
^^^^
Line 2, column 72, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
... is a good option because since we have spend all our time working and doing many stu...
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Line 2, column 109, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun stuff seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much stuff', 'a good deal of stuff'.
Suggestion: much stuff; a good deal of stuff
...ve spend all our time working and doing many stuff. Person may feel tired so spending time...
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Line 2, column 190, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing time in managed resort may lead to a relaxed and peacefull time. They may hav...
^^
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , india
...stance people visit countries like Nepal,india,Africa to see the lifestyle of the peop...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...to get knowledge about different thing. Also people will leran to adjust with the si...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, similarly, so, for instance, i think, talking about, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01901140684 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56393897219 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494296577947 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3392447885 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310378670947 0.242375264174 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107632507104 0.0925447433944 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594595067457 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185836300205 0.151781067708 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727264372146 0.0609392437508 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.32886699507 89% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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