Some person anticipates that there will be fewer cars in use than now in next 20 years; but, I do not believe so. The number of cars began to proliferate since 19th century as the population growing rapidly. We did not have well developed technology when the first car came into the market. Nowadays, 8 out of 10 families have car; thus, the number of cars as well as their use increase than 19th century.
Indeed, 2/3 of the world population have contemporary car. According to the retrospective survey, there was fewer cars and their use as well as population in 19th century but, now, it is contradictory. Example: if the world’s population is increasing by the 0.5% annually then it will be 10% of the present population by the end of 20th year. Thus, the number of cars and their use will also be amplifying with the same rate. By the end of 20th year, there will be 9 families out of 10 which have the car. So, the number of cars rapidly increasing as the population growing.
Furthermore, the world is living in a technological era; people are going to rely more and more on the technology. Technology changes the human’s life. It makes the life easier. The technology engenders continuing manufacture the immense numbers of car simultaneously. People also try to minimize the congestion with the help of technology by constructing over-bridged or under by pass etcetera and they get success in it. Scientists found a new way to use the cars or vehicles by converting the solar energy into the electrical energy. This technology is not fully developed yet. Once, this technology get success then it will be more and more easier to construct cars which will be run with the help of solar energy. Scientists are trying to develop this technology as soon as possible. I hope, in next 20 years, it will be at pinnacle of its success. Once, this technology comes into the market then it will be very easy to construct cars which will be run with the help of solar energy instead of fuel like diesel or petrol.
In inference, I strongly believe that the number of cars and their use will be more than there are today in next 20 years. Developing technology and growing population engenders in huge numbers of cars and their use.
- TPO-04 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-04 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-06 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-04 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 80
- TPO-04 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 645, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...gy get success then it will be more and more easier to construct cars which will be run wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, then, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6835443038 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75231443299 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445569620253 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8913978896 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4347826087 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1739130435 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91304347826 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19873276281 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673448022763 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584842099947 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146886783687 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229528154125 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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