You have to cancel an appointment with your bank branch manager. Please send him/her a letter and explain
- What the time and purpose of the appointment was.
- Why you are unable come to this appointment.
- Suggest an alternative time for the appointment.
Dear Mr.Alex,
I’m writing to cancel my appointment with you and I’m terribly sorry about this. It is on 12th of September at 8:00 AM. And as you may remember it’s all about my request for the loan to run my new business on steam engines. As you may hear in the News, there’s a heavy snow in Chicago and all the flights are canceled and roads aren’t safe to drive to Washington , consequently I got stocked here with no hope of coming back and be present for our appointment.
It will be a good chance for me to have another appointment with you on 20th of September at 9:30 AM. Please let me know if you have time for this meeting or not. You can contact me via my email, R@yahoo.com or my cell phone, 0915666666. Don’t hesitate to call me at any time.
Thanks for your time and consideration.
Yours Sincerely
Rahi
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