In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing.
What do you think are the main causes of crime?
How can we deal with those causes?
Crime can cause and create disturbance in every social aspect. Illegal procedures in every field is increasing nowadays in every country. There are so many sources for these wrong doings and obviously we can overcome this situation with some possible situation.
First of all, what are the growing causes of violence of rules?. There is a list of causes such as politics, regionalism, racism, drugs, depression, TV violence, and poor status are the rising effects of crime. Today every person is undergoing with depression for some reason and that is one of the tremendous elevation of misdeeds. Depression for not getting job, how they meet their family expense?, what are the sources to get instant money?. From these questions they look at the quickest way to solve their problems and these can only be resolve by breaching laws of any kind. On the other hand, drug sniffing are becoming very popular in youth. When the drug goes into their body than they loss their sense of judgment between right and wrong and commit unlawful procedures like rape, theft etc.
Now, What are the ways to overcome these crimes?. Firstly, We have to develop some programmes that reach to every individual of the countries and making aware of not doing violence of laws and make them understand that the crime they commit only get them in worse situation and ruin their lives. Also, You can focus on illegal use of drugs in your country and making your youth away from this bad habits. Guns free zones are also initiated in the more sensitive areas to avoid over killing or innocent killing.
In conclusion, while crime is overly expanding in every country with different factors we can overcome these sources by making awareness and making policies to get a environment which is free from crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, so, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91749174917 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38530996389 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587458745875 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2744892105 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229890630915 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789451569555 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711797775372 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151633602225 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035573068376 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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