The two charts demonstrates the rates of employment in Tanzania and Ireland in ,1999.
While the greatest sector in Ireland was services,the one in tanzania was agriculture.The
energy and water sector in ireland did not Tanzania in that year.
The sector with the greatest difference between two countries was agriculture.Most of the
Tanzania people were employed on farms.However,the rate of people working in this field in
Ireland was significantly low.On the other hand, in Ireland services had the highest
proportion of employees.This rate was almost five times as much as the rate of workers in
services in Tanzania.(14%)
Both the ratios of Manufacturing and construction in Ireland were higher than those of the sectors in Tanzania.Under a quarter of the Irish population worked in factories whereas the rate in Tanzania was much smaller.The diffrence of construction rates,however, was little in two countries.In tanzania construction had the smallest percentage.In Ireland it was energy,though.
- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 67
- the bar chart illustrates the number of students studying different subject at university level over a five year period 78
- Job fields 11
- Job fields 11
- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, whereas, while, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73026315789 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.59019493255 2.65546596893 135% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 22.4926829268 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 304.261218181 43.030603864 707% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 290.333333333 112.824112599 257% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.6666666667 22.9334400587 221% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.3333333333 5.23603664747 350% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 3.83414634146 235% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0220956570694 0.215688989381 10% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00993572307948 0.103423049105 10% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.014051234331 0.0843802449381 17% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0124710321279 0.15604864568 8% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035273405544 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.9 13.2329268293 234% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.27 61.2550243902 20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 10.3012195122 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.84 11.4140731707 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.79 8.06136585366 134% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.9970731707 200% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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