Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.In what way has the technology affected the types of relationship people make?Has this become positive or negative development?
In recent decades technology has changed many things in human life, one of these changes are the way people interact to one another. Due to advancement of technology most of the ways that people used to have for interacting with each other nowadays are obsoleted. In following I will attempt to analyze the ways technology has influence relationships we make. Moreover, its positive or negative consequences will be addressed.
In the past two decades development of internet among people, more than any other technology, has changed the way people interact to one another. People communicate to each other through internet, they make new friend from around the world and moreover, they might have business relationships through internet. Take Facebook as an example; currently Facebook has more than 1 billion users. Undoubtedly, it is the biggest society in one place, it means we can access to any one of these one billion people whenever we want. As a result, many people prefer to interact to other people through internet. However, there are advantages and disadvantages for this new ways of making relationships which in next paragraph I will address them.
First of all, about the advantages, these new technology helped people to contact each other faster, easier and in broader dimension. Consequently, people from all around the world can easily interact with each other. However, in negative side many people may argue that these new ways of interaction are less intimate comparing to old ways.
In conclusion, I personally believe despite some negative points, these new ways of making relationships are constructive for human interaction. Nonetheless I suggest that beside these new ways we can maintain some old ways of interaction with each other.
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