The professors are giving good education to the students and they are getting salary for it through the university. Some, might think that university can invest in lab or library to improve the education. I strongly agree that university should spend money on salary in order to give high level education to the students. To support my points, I want explain some reasons behind my argument.
First of all, motivation is key factor to achieve a goal which bring lots of changes in the education. Imagine that some university double the professor salary, then, professor automatically put their all effort to bring the excellent education system in their place where they work. That way, university and students will be benefited without any doubt. After of all, everyone wants handsome salary. Others, may think university should spend money other area like library, equipment and so on.
Secondly, professor may spend more for the students projects if they are well paid. For example, when handsome money in hand-they feel free spend lot more good thinks such as giving gift when students get good score in specific subject which inturn gives name and fame for the university. Professor will stay in that university long time. Many people says, it is professor duty to do his full effort why should the university encourage them. But, the fact is rewarding always reinforces the positive attitude to bring out good thinks from mind and body.
Finally, in order make sure that excellent teaching faculty work in longrun university must pay well. For example, when others offering than what the professor currently getting, then, he may switch to other university. So, university not only going to lose good professor but also it is hard for get new professor. Further, students may missing the some ways of different method of teaching which may feel more comfortable. Fewer, thinks that replacing and bring good professor not a hard taks because of the availability in the market.
To conclude, inorder to motivate, to spend more money teaching stuff and stay long in one university professor must well paid, so that, university and students will be benefits from his talent and skill which more essential elements in education sector.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14402173913 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5277275574 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546195652174 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6498715312 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.65 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164657133208 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058135115321 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557244159118 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110104721279 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541628723493 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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