Essay topic : Pet should be treated like family member
I really agree on this statement that " pet should be treated like family member". Nowadays ,most probably everybody like to keep the pet animal in home. However the reasons behind that are different like security purpose(like dogs ), entertainment purpose (cats), as friend and family member purpose.
As we keep these animals or pets in our home to fulfil our need in directly we treated them as family member. For example in my house I have cat as pet animal. Every day I give food to her. I arrange one small bed, litter box her. Means I do all thing which I also do my family member. because I treat her as family member she loves me lots. She obey my all order. If we treat them as family member instead as animal then animal feel more comfortable. They don't do any bad thing which you don't like. They really follow your all instructions. As they are living thing they can understand the feeling.
Somebody like to keep pet in their home to because they are lonely in world. Nobody is responsible to take care of them. Then these kind of people keep the pets in home to decrease the intensity of loneliness . Like somebody share their feeling with them, playing with them. If we treat them as family member then they will give you more love .
If you love them as family member obviously they will give you more love back.
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Sentence: She obey my all order.
Description: The fragment She obey my is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace obey with verb, past tense
Sentence: They really follow your all instructions.
Description: A determiner, possessive is not usually followed by a determiner/pronoun, pre-quantifier
Suggestion: Refer to your and all
Sentence: Like somebody share their feeling with them, playing with them.
Description: The fragment somebody share their is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace share with verb, past tense
Sentence: As we keep these animals or pets in our home to fulfil our need in directly we treated them as family member.
Error: fulfil Suggestion: fulfill
flaws:
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No. of Different Words: 126 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 15 in 30
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 243 350
No. of Characters: 1050 1500
No. of Different Words: 126 200
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Average Word Length: 4.321 4.6
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.789 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.001 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.328 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.481 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.23 0.07
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