Science had given many boons to humans. There are many mericals done by science, but some of them are dangerous. Folks are properly aware about the side effects but they still prefer it. This essay shall discuss the problems and give suitable solutions.
To begin with, There are many gifts given by science. Fast food is very necessary for those people who travel far places to earn their livings. If an individual have it in a huge quantity then he or she has to face many problems like over weight , obesity and many health problems. In addition to it, some segment of society prefer fast food to change taste of tongue. Drugs are intake by citizens to cure themselves from disease but overdose can cause a serious damage in your body. Smoking and alcohol are the two main reasons of causing critical hazards. Natives start taking them just for fun and get addicted to it.
As regards, it is not an issue which cannot be solved. Government and masses should take steps to secure themselves. Medical stores should provide medicines which are only prescribed by doctors and only in the given quantity. People should play games which are stress buster at the place of alcohol and smoking. Government should increase tax on these objects as well as organize awareness camps in schools and colleges. There should be an advertisements to awake the sleeping souls.
In the conclusion, I would like to say that each and every thing has a negative impact , humans should take care what is good for them and what is bad .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s to face many problems like over weight , obesity and many health problems. In ad...
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Line 1, column 454, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'serious damage'.
Suggestion: serious damage
...ves from disease but overdose can cause a serious damage in your body. Smoking and alcohol are t...
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Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an advertisement' or simply 'advertisements'?
Suggestion: an advertisement; advertisements
...n schools and colleges. There should be an advertisements to awake the sleeping souls. In the c...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ch and every thing has a negative impact , humans should take care what is good fo...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...re what is good for them and what is bad .
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...what is good for them and what is bad .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, well, as regards, as to, in addition, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7149321267 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37263241281 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0757546939 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4285714286 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7857142857 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108784391882 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357468285316 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051537637053 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.060926902481 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588873989526 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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