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The diagram shows how sports shoes are made. Write a summary of the information. Select and report the main features. Write at least 150 words.
Sports shoes are the most purchased item among the society nowadays. The following diagram illustrates the steps in manufacturing sport shoes.
Firstly, the pattern of the shoe is designed by professionals by means of computers. Once the design is completed, the resources are gathered for implementation. Tannery-leather, Mill Fabric and rubber are the raw materials for the processing. Various tailors are used to sketch and stitch the shape and style of the shoe. Once the process of sewing is completed, the shoe is topped with glued buttons and attached lasses.
Furthermore, the processed s...
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