Education is an essential part of any person's life. The age of starting the education has always been a debatable issue. As many countries promote younger age, about four years, for starting formal education whereas others think that it should be a little later. I advocate the younger age which is very apt for the children to start studying.
To begin with, initializing education at a younger age has become a necessity for the people because of their hectic lifestyles. Nowadays, both the parents are working in most of the countries and if the child is at home, they have to spare more time for the child compromising their working hours, hence their earnings. If the child goes to the school at the age of four they can have sufficient time for their professional obligations. Moreover, they can reschedule their working hours and concentrate in a better way for the overall development of the child as both the parents can equally participate in the upbringing of the child.
In support of the first view, it has also been proven in many studies that the development of the brain is at the peak till the age of four or five years and the child can, at that age be mentally prepared to learn the formal educational aspects of his life. Besides this, child can develop the habit of memorizing things in a structured method as in formal education in comparison to staying at home and learning.
On the other hand, there are many skeptical views regarding the age of beginning the studies. A child an get ample time for enjoying the childhood before taking any stress of studies. The tender age of child is not fully prepared for handling the challenges, though very minor, during the course of education. Education once started, cannot be left mid-way without completing the formal minimum qualification required for the person to be considered as educated. Therefore, the later, the better.
To summarize, although I believe that formal education should be started at the younger age of for or five as the child can become more self sufficient if he starts learning young but the benefits of starting school at the age of seven or eight cannot be negated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
Education is an essential part of any persons life. The age of starting the education...
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Line 7, column 103, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...e age of beginning the studies. A child an get ample time for enjoying the childho...
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Line 7, column 279, Rule ID: DURING_THE_COURSE_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'during'.
Suggestion: during
...ling the challenges, though very minor, during the course of education. Education once started, cann...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, whereas, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82573726542 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64291768846 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490616621984 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.5192898599 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3125 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179821180958 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672996105932 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471743339903 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111878693504 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316405854297 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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