The diagram below show how leather goods are produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates a process of the production of leather products. Different steps are involved for the production of leather goods which starts from animal skin drying to final product release.
Firstly, animal skins are dried and then transported to the factory. In the factory, dried skins are washed in lime water. After that, it again soaked in lime only. Next, lime soaked skins are flattened in flattening machine. After flattening process, the skins are again soaked in water which contains enzyme called tanin.
The last step of skin processing involves with polishing. During this step, the skins which are soaked in tanin containing water is polished, and then this polished skin is transported to the factory where different leather products, like shoes, leather bags, balls, and other leather equipments are made.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-11-22 | hahoaan | 73 | view |
| 2024-11-21 | Trần Ánh Vy | 73 | view |
| 2024-11-20 | Giang Tran | 78 | view |
| 2024-11-16 | Trần Ánh Vy | 67 | view |
| 2024-11-11 | hahoaan | 84 | view |
- Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like Is it good for children What are the consequences when they grow up 75
- Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.To what extent do you agree with this statement? 56
- The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. 67
- Nowadays some celebrities such as film stars sportsmen and pop musicians are paid too much money Do you agree or disagree Which jobs should be highly paid 57
- Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 132.0 196.424390244 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35606060606 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38956122427 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44558549835 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.2015134546 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5555555556 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0581566452839 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.025321999286 0.103423049105 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373556801715 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.050122228482 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365202507762 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.4329268293 39% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.