Some people feel that TV advertisements have no functional use for viewers, others disagree.
What is your opinion?
In the Modern era of technology, the world is enslaved to many new gimmicks of wishful thinking. Advertising plays the most vital role in molding thoughts, beliefs, and mindsets. It caters to a large audience and leaves an evermore lasting visual impact.
Advertising is a communication, in the form of attractive visuals, audio, and video. TV commercials have been one of the most popular mediums of advertising. It is said to have maximum reach and the most effective way of communication. While many people watch TV for leisure, there are plenty of others that find it a source of information.
Advertising may have seemed to be of no functional use, to those who like watching uninterrupted entertainment channels and shows. Advertisements these days can be misleading and overly exaggerated for effect. It could be conceived as a waste of time for those who have no interest in a particular product or service being advertised. People are more educated now, and this makes them aware of the pros and cons. A TV commercial advocating provoking negative thoughts or mannerisms are opposed on a large scale. For example, cigarettes are banned from adverting, as its injurious to Health. Since it is the most popular and fastest means of information, it should be used carefully. For example, people are now increasingly become aware of the marketing tactics of discreetly promoting racial discrimination and body shaming. Creating an enveloped demand by advertising fairness products and skinny jeans as fashion trends and setting unrealistic norms of being socially accepted.
On the other hand, adverting is a source of knowledge and information. People view TV commercials, as a review of the product. It creates awareness and serves the purpose of the audiences which is entertainment and information. A person may be mesmerized with the glamour and enchantment, projected in these ad films which leads to sales. Having a popular mascot or ambassador for a brand could attract their fan following to turn into loyal customers of that particular brand. For example, the famous cricketer M. S Dhoni, featuring in a Snickers chocolate commercial, is popularising the chocolate amongst his huge fan base as well. Awareness of a growing disease, it’s cause and prevention, can be informed to a large audience in a matter of minutes. TV commercials are most successful when they are relatable and are remembered long after, due to their emotional connection with its viewers. It is a researched fact, that most people have a positive impact from tv advertisements, as it is in a way molding thoughts and creating better lifestyles. For example spreading awareness campaigns for social causes such as Cleanliness, Environmental changes, and birth control pills.
I strongly support the idea that advertisements are useful. In my opinion, it plays a prime role in shaping young minds and enriching the learned.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 538, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a snicker' or simply 'Snickers'?
Suggestion: a snicker; Snickers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, well, while, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2456.0 1615.20841683 152% => OK
No of words: 470.0 315.596192385 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22553191489 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14093290026 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 176.041082164 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563829787234 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 767.7 506.74238477 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5887920223 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6896551724 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2068965517 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75862068966 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256425959639 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581906748693 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460647734369 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122937212797 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658962530621 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 153.0 78.4519038076 195% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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