You purchased a children's toy from the Internet. When you got the toy, it had some problems. Write a letter to the manager.. describe the toy, what the problem was, what action you want them to take.
Dear Sir,
I am writing in regard to the defected piece delivered to me. I purchased a toy from your website last week, and my order number is 2314.
It is my sons birthday on the 12th of July, and I promised him his favorite toy, the Marvel superhero limited edition of the Iron Man. Having read some impressive reviews about your services and timely delivery commitments, I decided to place an order for my son’s birthday present with Amazon. A birthday party without his most requested present will be incomplete.
My order has arrived on time, although the arm of the action fixture is broken. I would like you to immediately replace it with a new, intact piece. I also suggest you run a quick quality check through all your packages before it proceeds for delivery. My husband is home on Thursdays, so kindly do the needful by this week itself.
I hope you shall take prompt action to resolve my problem, without further delay. I would also like you to give me a free delivery for the inconvenienced caused to me. I wish to continue having uninterrupted, pleasant experiences with your company and I hope you will live up to your commitments.
Yours sincerely,
Chandrika
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing in regard to the defected p...
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Line 9, column 169, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ry for the inconvenienced caused to me. I wish to continue having uninterrupted, ...
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Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o your commitments. Yours sincerely, Chandrika
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78743961353 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70886585332 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647342995169 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.43756878 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2307692308 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.69230769231 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168598036016 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555854893278 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478848399128 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103742470186 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367500034696 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.