Give report and summary for IELTS Writing task 1
The table indicates information about the underground railway systems in six famous cities.
London was the earliest city opening the subway system in 1863. It was earlier than other cities from 37 to 138 years which was over a century. Moreover, London also had the longest railroad with 394 kilometres. Because of the early development, the number of passenger in London was the second high of six cities with 775 million people pay for this subway. On the other hand, the latest construction of the subway system in Los Angeles was opened in 2001. Having 28 kilometres of route, Los Angeles’s underground system received 50 million passengers each year. Meanwhile, the earlier system opened in 1981 in Kyoto was even shorter with just 11 killometres so just 45 million passengers annually. Slightly, the system in Washington DC just contained 126 kilometres and had 144 million people pay for a trip each year. Both Paris and Tokyo opened the system in early 19th century and both had the ideal number of passengers with orderly were 1191 and 1927 million passeners every year.
In conclusion, those systems operated before the middle of 19th century seemed to more develop than those went into active after that period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, second, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05392156863 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55042853219 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5279282418 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7272727273 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.23603664747 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0203887580602 0.215688989381 9% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00863510980764 0.103423049105 8% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0183269783811 0.0843802449381 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00747849033481 0.15604864568 5% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0105761824576 0.0819641961636 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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