A person goes through different stages of life through out his existence. Although some people may claim that youth is best time to enjoy, other argue that senescence is the fun, but I think childhood stage is most jovial. I would like to explore my points in the following essay: childhood comes with fun without worries. In fact many psychologist thinks that childhood is the time to create memories for the entire life. Children are devoid of any stress relating to monetary budget, expenses, social and professional career, in contrast they have free will to play their favorite games, have privilege of exploring places every vacation and opportunity to be loved by the family members. My own experience is compelling example of this. When I was five years old my I went to different places my state such as beach, gir sanctuaries, zoo and law garden funtainment paradise with my parents every vacation. In addition my parents allowed me to participate in my favorite sports game volley ball that coupled with harmony, cooperation and team work with my fellow class mates. Critics argue that youth can happiness advocates with late night party, involving in adventurous activities such as parasailing, mountain climbing, sky diving and so on. However, in today's modern contemporary world youngsters are oppressed with tons of responsibility to prove themselves, to feed family and to meet expenses of extravagant life style. In addition, cost of living increases exponentially every year so youth need to strive hard to manage. Apparently, they barely spare time to fulfill their hobbies. As a result, my point is supported by the above explanation. Flipping to other side of the coin, childhood is usually free of chronic diseases, while old age invites health issues such as cardiovascular disorders, orthopedic condition in multiple joints. Even if old people spend their life in accumulating wealth to fulfill their desires by blood, sweat and tears, they might not get opportunity to enjoy life to fullest. Adventurous activities requires sound health, so elderly are refrained from those activities. To sum up, childhood entails with freedom, fun, without any tension, hustle and bustle of the practical life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...xplore my points in the following essay: childhood comes with fun without worries...
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...and law garden funtainment paradise with my parents every vacation. In addition m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, however, if, may, so, while, i think, in addition, in contrast, in fact, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20391061453 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82453067498 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642458100559 0.524837075471 122% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3167004655 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.588235294 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0588235294 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167777906564 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546587688913 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650036712699 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167777906564 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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