In some countries healthcare is free, paid by the state. In other countries, payment is divided between the state and people themselves. Discuss both systems, and say which one is better.
Together with ongoing population and the number of patients annually, is overwhelming. Healthcare system is a crucial factor for each and every individual. I believe healthcare system should be free due to various reasons.
To begin with, advance technology had made life easier as well as complicated. Treatments which rely on advance technological machinery cost a fortune, for example, plastic surgery, cancer treatments, etc. These expenses cannot be handled by the patient alone. In addition, the taxation from the society had increased never before; this in-turn affects the financial status ...
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Together with ongoing population and the number of patients annually, is overwhelming.
Suggestion: Can you re-write this sentence? where is subject?
Sentence: However, I suppose, its fair for the state to contribute half of the money to each patients in order to access quality treatments.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to each and patients
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No. of Words: 258 350
If you want higher marks, put more content.
Be sensitive to use 'On the other hand', 'However','Nonetheless', 'But' in the essays.
'On the other hand' means However. It doesn't mean 'On another hand'
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Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 258 350
No. of Characters: 1365 1500
No. of Different Words: 159 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.008 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.291 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.949 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 111 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 56 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.429 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.66 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.317 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.617 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.072 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5