Some people believe that a great difference between the ages of parents and children is more beneficial. Do you think the advantages of greater difference between the ages outweigh disadvantages ?
Certain people thinks that, the greater the age gap between guides and kids, more it will be useful. I think; parents will have more experience of life by which they will help their children to achieve greater heights. The ensuing lines will put forth subsequent efforts to illustrate why i believe it has more pros than cons of having big age difference.
First of all, mentors will be more mature as they have faced so many adverse situations and come out of it, that is why, they will prove to be a good guide for their kins. Moreover, as they are financially stable then they can give their children a better life as well as provide them education in a well known institution. Furthermore, guardians will boost the confidence of their children as they encourage them to take the decision in their life and be a responsible citizen of their country. For instance, Recent survey done by a leading newspaper showed that number of parents in the 30's have increased.
In addition, caretakers will value the importance of discussion in the family about taboo topics, such as, rape, female foeticide, and so on. Along with it, children are will be more open towards their family, if something happens then they will without hesitation discuss with their parents about the whole incident. Besides this, instead of punishing their children for mistakes, they will make them work in a community service, thereby contributing to the society. For example, to make his son more responsible famous martial artist, Jackie Chan made a will according to this all his money will go to charity after his death.
To put my pen down, I would like to say that lesser the difference between ages of parents and children will be beneficial, if they do not want any complication in conceiving. However, we cannot deny the benefits of the greater age difference between parents and children which is not only useful to a little one but also to the society as a whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82195845697 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58196047859 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569732937685 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.0295024363 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.416666667 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0833333333 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202650318528 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921307790917 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1042358157 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165404315632 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134525888497 0.056905535591 236% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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