Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others think people should be free to choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays adventure sports have become a trendy hobby all around the world. Some people think that Extreme sport should be banned, while others believe that an individual’s freedom should not be forbidden. In my opinion, people should be allowed to participate in any physical activity as long as they are aware of its dangers.
On the one hand, some sports such as skiing can be extremely dangerous as heavy injuries and deaths are frequently caused. According to BBC, fifteen people died during the 2016-2017 snowing seasons in Colorado, United State. Therefore, some people argue that X-game should be banned by the government for community’s safety. Those who favor the banning of adventure sports believe that human lives are far more valuable than the momentary joys of such sports. Parents are afraid that their children may be injured by doing these sports since most youngsters are not fully aware of the consequences. Banning extreme sports will certainly prevent people from sports injuries or even fatal accidents.
On the other hand, extreme sports has become a beneficial way for young people to explore limit. The bicycle was created as a means of transport, however, some sportsmen found that changing some parts could help them doing spectacular performance. As a result, many people are really enjoying it and challenge each other’s limits. Day by day, BMX has been recognized as a sport requiring a tremendous amount of talent, creativity and has become the competitors’ main source of income. Because of this professional athletes fully depend on competing to provide for their daily needs. Banning these dangerous sports may very well be cutting the entirety of their salaries.
To conclude, extreme sports can pose serious harms to human lives, however, I believe they should not be banned because everybody has the right to do any sports they choose as long as it does not harm the community.
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- he graph below shows the writing technology used by undergraduate students to prepare assignments at a university in 1970, 1982 and 1994.Summaries the information presented in this graph by seecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons whe 78
- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 61
- Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others think people should be free to choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to do' or 'do'.
Suggestion: to do; do
...hat changing some parts could help them doing spectacular performance. As a result, m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, really, so, therefore, well, while, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20447284345 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73930316112 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594249201278 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0853707622 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.8125 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360044065002 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116831791971 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117854076799 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23132831393 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127416334068 0.056905535591 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.