Nowadays, a spike in crime rate has become a major concern for all nations around the world. This essay will try to understand the reasons behind it and the corrective measures that should be taken to eradicate criminal activities.
To embark upon, the main reason for an individual to follow the path of wrong doings is lack of education. Education is the only policy that can help a person to understand between right and wrong. In a country like India, majority of it's population is devoid of basic school education. As a result, children start to indulge into petty crimes from an early age. And by the time they are grown ups, they become seasoned campaigners in this profession and commit crimes.
In continuity, another factor is dearth of job opportunities for people from all walks of life. As the saying goes, an empty mind is devil's house, so someone who is not involved in any kind of job will resort to crime to make an earning and fulfill his/her needs. Therefore, the government should work with wisdom to create job options that cater to people from different backgrounds. Moreover, income disparity is another aspect on which administration should work to reduce the same because too much difference in salaries means people will explore alternate ways of increasing their earning which can lead to indulgence in malpractices.
To recapitulate, the governments should actively work towards methodologies and solutions that can help an individual to make an earning and support personal growth as well. Thereby, it will help in creating a crime free world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, well, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01520912548 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74503122077 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619771863118 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7909044646 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.461538462 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0897740907879 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332304996394 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287737001445 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0553109076763 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127065593705 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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