The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The chart shows number of hours male and female spend their free time in accordance to their job starting from year 1998 to 1999. Depending on the different type of job, they spend their leisure time in different ways.
Male which are employed in full-time job are shown to spend their leisure time more than the female. Number of hours that they spend is around 43 hours than that in female which is around 39 hours. For part-time worker, female spend roughly around 42 hours but, male interestingly does not shows to like spending any time for leisure. On the other hand, male and female illustrate similar number of hours doing leisure activity for unemployed as well as retire. 82 hours for both males and 78 hours respectively in female.
For housewives, it shown that they like to spend free time close to those female who are working and less than those who retire and jobless. Female working as a housewives spend around 45 hours doing activities that they like.
In conclusion, it shows that, in spite of the job that they have, male shows to spend more time doing things they like compare to those in female.
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Sentence: For housewives, it shown that they like to spend free time close to those female who are working and less than those who retire and jobless.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to it and shown
male interestingly does not shows to like spending any time for leisure.
Description: two verbs in one sentence.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 198 200
No. of Characters: 900 1000
No. of Different Words: 91 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.751 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.545 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.152 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 48 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 28 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 18 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.173 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.3 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.501 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.705 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.189 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4