Most people suggests that, perform tasks on splendid ways which in the future provide lots of benefits for you. Interestingly, everyone has their own perspective regarding, what should they do to carryout multitasks in an accurate way. It feels great to work on mind while doing something, rather than perform works in wrong ways. It is highly debatable topic, which talks about it is crucial for people to start with velocity, without focusing, regarding works while they wants to do. However, personally I disagree because of plentiful justify reasons. which i will mention in the following essay.
First of all, work without thinking means, you are not sensible about life. However, some tasks are tricky that require much efforts to be done. On contrary, some works required person's fast steps. Great moment will cross your life when you done tasks successfully without hesitation and velocity. My own experience is compelling of this example. whenever, I wanted to do study in high school, I always used to do with great patience. After one year, I registered my self as a university school. At first, I do not paid attention on lessons , I always thought university lessons are easy. The day of exams came though, my preparation was not good. I decided to cover all subjects in one day. But, I were not be able to finish all my lessons under a day. I failed ever and realized, I should not take decisions that confronted me to many conflicts in order to make the life tough. After that, I started again the same routine, which I carried out in the school.
Second, hurry about tasks or works will increase the rate of risks in people life. In spite of the facts, every one knows that, life has lots of circumstances plus risks. So, successful people are those whom, which reduce the risk's range in their life. In this point of view, people should try to eliminate the causes of risks regarding, works in various places namely, office, school, university and so many other places. For instances, my friend wanted to go abroad for picnic. I already informed him about exams that, they are on the way. He told me that, he will turn soon before exams. But this is not happened. His fast decision was the only cause of his failure. Perhaps, he became hopeless due to, performed work in a wrong way without think.
Taking all as consideration, successful people always use their mind regarding some works when they wants to complete it. However, tasks may be difficult to do or may wants huge efforts it does not mean that select wrong way for performing. Although, success depends on many factors. I believe, choose a good way and work without hurry should be consider at first.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an accurate way" with adverb for "accurate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...t should they do to carryout multitasks in an accurate way. It feels great to work on mind while d...
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Line 1, column 474, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...ut focusing, regarding works while they wants to do. However, personally I disagree b...
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Line 1, column 556, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...e because of plentiful justify reasons. which i will mention in the following essay. ...
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Line 1, column 556, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e because of plentiful justify reasons. which i will mention in the following essay. ...
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Line 1, column 562, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...use of plentiful justify reasons. which i will mention in the following essay. ...
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Line 2, column 121, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ver, some tasks are tricky that require much efforts to be done. On contrary, some w...
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Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'did'?
Suggestion: did
...at moment will cross your life when you done tasks successfully without hesitation a...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whenever
...perience is compelling of this example. whenever, I wanted to do study in high school, ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f this example. whenever, I wanted to do study in high school, I always used to d...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...irst, I do not paid attention on lessons , I always thought university lessons are...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...ll subjects in one day. But, I were not be able to finish all my lessons under a d...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ish all my lessons under a day. I failed ever and realized, I should not take dec...
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Line 3, column 722, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a wrong way" with adverb for "wrong"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... became hopeless due to, performed work in a wrong way without think. Taking all as consider...
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Line 4, column 101, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...eir mind regarding some works when they wants to complete it. However, tasks may be d...
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Line 4, column 242, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n that select wrong way for performing. Although, success depends on many factors. I bel...
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Line 4, column 347, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'considered'?
Suggestion: considered
...od way and work without hurry should be consider at first.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, regarding, second, so, while, for instance, first of all, in spite of, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2217.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 465.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76774193548 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49317161368 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54623655914 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 9.59856630824 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8037826214 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.1818181818 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0909090909 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147044529882 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347110949932 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366273511603 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955938210347 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333273979519 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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