You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.
Dear Sir or Madam
I am a regular customer of your HAFT KHAN restaurant, writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the meal and dessert that we were served last Sunday.
my husband and i went to your restaurant on 18th December at around 8 o'clock to celebrate our first marriage anniversary. It supposed to be a happy and memorable night for us as we were commemorating such a special event, in one of our favorite restaurants, but it was a frustrating experience that we had.
I suppose that you can imagine our disappointment when we found the onion soup salty and with a very bad smell. Moreover, the main course was raw, salty and under cooked and it was not up to our expectation. In addition, the ice-cream that we ordered came to our table without marshmallow and strawberry on top, despite their mention in the menu. we told that to the waiter but no comment or apology was made and instead he told us to complain to the manager.
I would be appreciate that if you could take a proper action to this inconvenience event that we had due to the bad meal and unprofessional behavior of your restaurant's staff also, I demand a full refund that I paid for a worthless meal at your restaurant. Otherwise, consider me as a lost customer. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Your faithfully
SAMINE JOON
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...ert that we were served last Sunday. my husband and i went to your restaurant o...
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Line 4, column 16, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e served last Sunday. my husband and i went to your restaurant on 18th Decembe...
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Line 4, column 71, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...restaurant on 18th December at around 8 oclock to celebrate our first marriage anniver...
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Line 6, column 348, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...top, despite their mention in the menu. we told that to the waiter but no comment ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, i suppose, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64730290456 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94010268262 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622406639004 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.0162685934 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.818181818 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225975588931 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742939080257 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657459415562 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126124619877 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614511724118 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.