You have a friend who lives in a city abroad.
You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city.
Write to your friend explaining what you would like to do. Tell him/her what type of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years and ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution.
Dear Diah Kurnia,
Sorry I haven't written for ages. I've been so busy over the last year and I never seem to have a minute to myself.
I'd like to study electrical engineering at university in Australia next year and I hope you can give me some advice. I think I would prefer Melbourne because I know a few people from my visit last year.
This year I'm doing maths and physics at school and I hope to do well in my exams. However, I really don't know which university to apply to, so could you send me some information about different colleges? Also can you find out what qualifications I nee...
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Avg. Sentence Length: 16.1 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.467 7.5
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 161 200
No. of Characters: 635 1000
No. of Different Words: 97 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.562 4.0
Average Word Length: 3.944 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.391 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 29 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 21 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 13 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 10 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.1 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.467 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.7 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.463 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.662 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.238 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4