Dear Sir,
I am one of the new customers at your bank. A few days ago, I have opened my bank account there and I was supposed to obtain new bank card at my residence address. Recently, I got a letter from bank to acknowledge receipt of the same. As I opened the envelope, I got shocked by seeing the card missing and the thought which is making me more worried that if it has been reached to the wrong address, it could be used by anyone.
I called the bank repeatedly but could not get through the right department. Also, I have to wait for an hour on the line which was very annoying. But now, the line is not even getting connected.
Since, I have enrolled in the university for higher studies and I have to live far from my home. So, in this situation, it is necessary to have a bank card in order to carry out my day to day expenses. As, I am leaving for university within a couple of days. So, i just hope you will take this matter seriously and ask the designated authorities to resend the card as soon as possible so that I may not have to get worried more.
I will be very obliged to you for this.
Yours sincerely,
Sarah.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 265, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...niversity within a couple of days. So, i just hope you will take this matter seri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 5.60731707317 553% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.19909502262 4.92477711251 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38567553516 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574660633484 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 1.53170731707 849% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.835393299 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3846153846 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.69230769231 5.23603664747 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322135960543 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101930452302 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765987616556 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156825855567 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955115439782 0.0819641961636 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.2329268293 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 11.4140731707 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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