You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.Write a letter to formal teacher. In your letter :Give detail of the job Explain why it is important to you Suggest what information your teacher could out in the reference.

Dear Mrs. Smith,

I hope you are doing well and everything is fine at school too. I am writing this letter to request you for a reference letter for the job.

As, I have completed graduation in computer science and now I have applied for a job of software programmer at Hewlett-Packard, a well established company.The package, they are offering to freshers, is as per my expectations. Luckily, I got an interview call from their side and I was asked to bring the reference letter as well. I am very excited about this job as my career will be getting started from a field in which I keep keen interest.

I will be obliged if you mention the details about my performances in academic, sports and other activities because it will help me to get this job.

Yours sincerely,
Jaden

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...to freshers, is as per my expectations. Luckily, I got an interview call from th...
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... their side and I was asked to bring the reference letter as well. I am very exci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 651.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 140.0 206.0 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88708418686 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664285714286 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 201.6 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.7300886374 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.71428571429 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21705004178 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905804986412 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924314684564 0.0603063233224 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150725164372 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845660493038 0.0580467560999 146% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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