You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much.
Write a letter to the restaurant to thank them. Mention the food, service and the atmosphere. Also suggest any improvements to make things better. (Study Sample)
You should write at least 150 words.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Dear Sir,
Last week on Saturday night some friends and I had dinner in your restaurant to celebrate my birthday. I am writing to thank you for the great evening that we had.
All my friends remarked afterwards on the standard of the food and service that we received. All the food was very tasty and well presented. Our waiter, whose name was James, was fast and friendly and put with well with our bad jokes! The restaurant itself was warm and friendly and the atmosphere showed that all the dinners there were enjoying their evening.
I would like though to suggest one improveme...
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flaws:
No. of Words: 148 200
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 148 200
No. of Characters: 663 1000
No. of Different Words: 90 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.488 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.48 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.392 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 40 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 31 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 21 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 12 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.789 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.3 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.387 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.647 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.197 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4