The world has evolved with revolutionary changes over time and most of these radical changes are brought by the sedulous leaders who contend for the beliefs on which they stand tenaciously. Public consist of lots of such dissident leaders who still aspire to work for a reason and bring change that is going to bring enlightenment in their society. However, public opinion is divergent in nature. For every cause, there is a protagonist who stands doggedly for his beliefs and then there are opponents who excoriate those beliefs. And for the leader to choose the right over wrong becomes a dilemma not because he is confused between these divergent opinions but by the fact that how is he going to proof the right over the wrong. There comes the law book which states the set of rules and principles which is designed with the consensus of the judiciary system on which a country stands and hence could work to maintain peace.
The mandate contains the set of rules and axioms according to which a country should run ensuring peace. The leader is not that person who is going to support the majority and will follow the belief of what majority of public thinks. He is going to take a veracious decision even if the majority of people censure him from doing so. And for taking this rebellious step he needs certain rules on the basis of which he could support his idea. For example, a few days back supreme court gave his judgment on Sabarimala temple case which detracts the views of the majority of the public in Kerala. But the egalitarian decision of the supreme court made an epitome of equality and ultimately, showed his support for the minority group of people. This is a paradigm for those who think that a set of rules makes a person conservative and could not help in bringing the radical changes commensurating to the changing time of the world.
A leader is a person with qualities of decision making who thinks and works for the welfare and enrichment of his people. It is very important for him to give an unbiased and evenhanded decision which is salubrious for everyone. People think that following axioms makes a person dogmatic and orthodox. But they forget to take into account the fundamental objective of these set of laws that without these tenets there will be no one who is able to take a final decision on any controversial topic. For any altercation that takes place between different factions could be resolved only by the help of a leader who is going to take a fair decision on the basis of defined rules which was made formerly by the consensus of those groups. There were many instances when it was seen that discrepancy in opinions on the topics like caste, color, status, a religious belief which leads to serious truculent behavior of combating groups results in deteriorating the peace of their surrounding. To maintain peace in such conditions, the law is the foremost thing that he can use.
Also, it is wrongly stated that the leader has to always stick upon the same set of rules which was stated salubrious for decades ago. With time changing, innovation is taking place and technology is advancing. When everything is advancing and evolving then why not these set of rules. There should be brought proper consensus by the leader on a topic which is no longer the same as it was before. Historically, there were many topics which are not considered to be given even a minute attention for which today there are big scuffles taking place. For example, the supreme court has shown so many examples of always advocating the equality and authenticity of a matter. It gave his sagacious justice for gay sex by decriminalizing it, a bill is passed to indict a long prevailing rule of triple talaq in India. It is clearly visible that you do not have to compromise your beliefs in order to bring praiseworthy change amongst your society, you just have to fight for it.
Therefore,the set of rules and principles are the pillars over which the peace of a country is maintained. For the leader to work for the enrichment of his people he should ensure that his decision is not biased and if needed he could work on making viable changes in these rules but discriminating the whole rulebook over the diverse opinions of his public will be foolhardy. He should consider eclectic views of public and should make insightful decision according to the axioms of what could be done and what more changes still has to be done.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 43.0 19.5258426966 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 38.0 11.3162921348 336% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 59.0 33.0505617978 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 103.0 58.6224719101 176% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3688.0 2235.4752809 165% => OK
No of words: 779.0 442.535393258 176% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73427471117 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.28304566267 4.55969084622 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.575896064 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 322.0 215.323595506 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.413350449294 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1171.8 704.065955056 166% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9514925372 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.967741935 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1290322581 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.48387096774 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153151758056 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461268826713 0.0831039109588 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336626864446 0.0758088955206 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101875155734 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207162720459 0.0667264976115 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 159.0 100.480337079 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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