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Young people should spend more time on cultural activities such as music and theatre and less time on sport. How far do you agree with this statement.
There is a strong argument that adolescent should enjoy and use their time in cultural activities including playing music and theatre and deduct their time for playing sport. However, other people say that sport is more important than music and theatre. In addition, playing sport helps to be healthy, teaches to coordinate as a team member, and reveals opportunity to become professional sport player. This essay will describe the importance of sport that must be taken into account for the youngster.
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