what is the most important action for the government to take for the protection of environmental problems?
1- fund researches on new energy sources such as solar and wind power.
2- protect forests and natural wildlife species
3- pass and enforce laws to reduce the pollution
In my opinion, a good government should have an overview plan on solving problems. In order to protect the environment, I suggest that the government should focus on developing new energy sources as the first priority. The points which I supported are as below.
First, it seems like a good idea to protect forests and wildlife species. However, the environmental problems occur at more conditions. The ocean is polluted by the plastic garbage littering. The air pollution also becomes more seriously due to the growth of factories. The government has more funding and technology to develop new energy resource to solve more problems. Developing the new energy sources can reduce the carbon dioxide during the industrial production. Thus, no matter wildlife species or people can benefit from the better air condition. Besides, the solar energy is expect to replace parts of the power from oil. The less usage of oil can reduce the amounts of plastic products. Then, the problem caused by plastic garbage littering can be decreased.
Some people might rely on strict laws to reduce the pollution. However, the pollution is usually cause by the people that merely care about money.
The industries can lower their cost by throwing garbage without management. In order to product more goods, the factories might expand their production line and consume more pollution. The strict laws can't block the ambition from the greedy people. On the other side, the government can encourage researchers to develop new energy sources. The new energy sources are possible to make the industries profit more. Take the solar energy for example, the company that use solar energy as part of resources can cost less fee on electricity. The company can even sell the remaining power that stored in solar device. With profitable new energy sources, people can make money with less pollution.
To sum up, developing the new energy sources is the most important action for the government. It can not only solve a part of the problems but improve the environment more generally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, so, then, thus, for example, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 43.0788530466 26% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13649851632 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6075269824 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528189910979 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 17.0 3.08781362007 551% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.3055066423 48.9658058833 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.24 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.48 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252434197678 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674239068158 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716372038439 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13921583201 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643806305225 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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