Write a letter to your local council about a situation which created a lot of dirt on your street. In your letter- Explain what caused it.- How is it affecting you and your neighbors?- Suggest how it can be solved.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I would like to bring to your notice that yesterday there was a small get together in my neighborhood, due to which the whole street was littered, causing a lot of inconvenience to the other people residing in the area. Although the hosts had arrange for garbage bins, but due to the lack of public manners, many of them did not use it, resulting in collection of garbage all around.

The leftovers of the food has made the place messy and releases a pungent smell which has become intolerable for the neighbors. Apart from this, the disposable stuff used for eating has also not been cleaned properly becoming a eye sore for the surroundings.

The one solution to this problem that comes to my mind is that a public official can be deputed, who could take necessary action and penalize the people responsible for such an irresponsible behavior, besides getting the area cleaned much to the relief of the other neighbors.

Awaiting your prompt and affirmative reply,

Sincerely yours,

Navpreet kaur

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to bring to your notice that yesterday ther...
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Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'arranged'.
Suggestion: arranged
...ing in the area. Although the hosts had arrange for garbage bins, but due to the lack o...
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Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'arranged'.
Suggestion: arranged
...ing in the area. Although the hosts had arrange for garbage bins, but due to the lack o...
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Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...also not been cleaned properly becoming a eye sore for the surroundings. The ...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesore'.
Suggestion: eyesore
...so not been cleaned properly becoming a eye sore for the surroundings. The one solut...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, so, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00578034682 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70814029483 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682080924855 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.8120359687 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.333333333 76.5299724578 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8333333333 16.8248392259 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108357799995 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514420265787 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508610638449 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766346844556 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594579016261 0.0580467560999 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 8.37731958763 198% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 70.7449484536 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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