some people think that beat way to solve the global environment problem is to increase the price fuel. upto what extent do you agree or disagree?

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some people think that beat way to solve the global environment problem is to increase the price fuel.
upto what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,earth' s temperature is increasing at an alarming rate.Automobiles have a great hand in spreading pollutions.Some individuals think that it can be tackled by rise in price of fuel.I partially agree with the statement

To commence with, if cost of fuel is increased then people shall use less vehicles which shall lead to decline in global warming.Secondly,industries which a mushrooming shall use substitutes like electricity,wind and solar energy for the production of goods in addition to it,it many be less effective on environment.Infact the negative impact of inflation is,it shall cause a grave situation for the natives of a country by making it financially week.

it is not a big deal to crub the situation, because there are many other ways to solve this critical situations.Government should incline the tax rates on the private vehicles.So that people may use them less the pollutions to grave.High authorities should invest money from government coffins to make masses aware about the non renewable resources which are getting disappeared.Scientists should discover new vehicles which shall run on bettery and may be recycled.Commuting by the help of eco friendly vehicles will cause no harm to the flora.

While keeping my pen down, i would like to say that fuel is not only the reason due to which temperature rates are increasing.global warming is leading are due to deforestation,shooting populations and many more.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38325991189 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.0144125065 2.80592935109 143% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647577092511 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 75.0 20.2975951904 370% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 196.789791967 49.4020404114 398% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 407.333333333 106.682146367 382% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 75.6666666667 20.7667163134 364% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.3333333333 7.06120827912 260% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102421886124 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578149111745 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037540090295 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0610260119583 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390206623333 0.056905535591 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.7 13.0946893788 318% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -13.11 50.2224549098 -26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.7 11.3001002004 298% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.11 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.74 8.58950901804 137% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 9.78957915832 613% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.0 10.1190380762 316% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 60.0 10.7795591182 557% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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