Free is the most important factor in our life and can cause develop and advance in people's lives. Some people agree with this statement and some disagree. In my view, free has a key role in our lives for two essential reasons.
First, if we have freedom of expression we easily discuss problems such as problems in education, prosperity, and health. For example, in my hometown, there wasn't any hospital and we suffered from that very much, we decided to got together and discussed freely with officials after a while they solved this significant problem. So, freedom helps us and our town.
Second, freedom in the choice cuase essential situation in our life. We should choose our field, career, and future spouse.
For example, when I chose my field of study, my family forced me in a specific field on engineering and I couldn't finish my study, because that field was very problematic for me and I didn't like that. Moreover, it was time-consuming. If I could choose my favorite field I could better study and had a good career in the future.
In conclusion, the best and worthy thing in lives is free.
- tpo 49 3
- TPO 49- Independent writingDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily. 70
- Essay topics: Essay topics: TPO45Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 70
- TOEFL T P O 49 - Integrated Writing Task 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...lth. For example, in my hometown, there wasnt any hospital and we suffered from that ...
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Line 6, column 107, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...n a specific field on engineering and I couldnt finish my study, because that field was...
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Line 6, column 185, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...field was very problematic for me and I didnt like that. Moreover, it was time-consum...
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Line 6, column 329, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dy and had a good career in the future. In conclusion, the best and worthy thing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 52.1666666667 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 1977.66487455 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 194.0 407.700716846 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74742268041 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.48103885553 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56918820376 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 212.727598566 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634020618557 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 618.680645161 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.646391018 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.75 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0959790893596 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416561724335 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548633395103 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726503724594 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067375969444 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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