In your opinion, which period of time is the most difficult in a person’s life:
1. Childhood 2. Teenage 3. Adulthood
Immersing myself in a huge pile of working paper, with figures keeping “dancing” on the computer screen, remaining thinking of numerous bills waiting for payment, worrying about my brother who was still in hospital after hours of surgery, I found my eyes filling with tears for such stresses. Suddenly, I felt craving for years when I was blissfully brought up in my parents’ arm. I desired to come back to my teenage, to run and play with my friends on carefree days. Then, backing to present moments, unexpectedly, I realized how hard it is to be an adult.
Concerning physical health, the more we grow up, the more tired we get. As children and adolescents, we are always cared for by our parents. We ought not to think about what to eat or where to live. Nevertheless, growing up into adults, we are to shoulder various responsibilities in life. All the burden of bread-and-butter issues as well as the wish to offer an abundantly material life to our loved ones forces us to try hard to earn money. Toiling and moiling for a living, accidentally, we forget that we do need a rest. Sometimes, we cannot remember when the last time we could listen to a single song or finish reading an entire book is. Probably, fathers may find no time for their child. After long days at work, instead of taking rest, mothers possibly feel overloaded with cooking and housework. At times, we realize that we are too exhausted to keep moving, but we knew we are not supposed to stop.
Speaking of mental health, adults are prone to suffer more psychological problems. Again, with restless physical pressures come mental stresses. Being fatigue, we find it is challenging to stay calm, and therefore, we easily get angry with others. This negatively affects our relationships, making ways for mental pressures to escalate. In another story, continuously confining ourselves to office with paperwork and computer screens only, we cannot realize how our relations with family, friends, and other people are turning loose. Not until we get stressed and really need someone to talk to, do we feel like a fish out of water. As bread-and-butter issues are no longer our daily worries, loneliness appears to be the most frightful obsession. It distorts our soul, silently eats up our heart, and waits to “kill” us in isolation. Besides, death and grief, divorce and separation are all unbearable misery that not children but merely adults who can thoroughly experience.
Regarding freedom, many may assume that while children and teenagers are constantly kept under parents’ supervision, adults are completely free for their time and choices. Nonetheless, this is not always true. Indeed, being adults, we must be more responsible and self-disciplined. When younger, we always find our parents and teachers there at our side to teach us from wrong to right, to give us second chances for our faults. As we grow up, freedom is exactly a “knife with two blades”. If well-controlled, we flourish. Yet, simply due to an involuntary mistake, our whole life is paid. Sometimes, we just yearn to go back to our past to be canned for childish tricks, to have someone remind us to go to bed early and, to sense love from our parents again.
Every phase of life has its own positives and challenges. Whether we want or not, we all grow up. After a series of ups and downs in life, we learn that no matter how physically or mentally tired we are, we should be self-disciplined and determined to overcome obstacles in life, and success is when we can achieve what we plan for.
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Did you mean 'staying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: staying
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: much may; a good deal of may
...ughly experience. Regarding freedom, many may assume that while children and teenager...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ults. As we grow up, freedom is exactly a 'knife with two blades'. If w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, really, regarding, second, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, speaking of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 88.0 52.1666666667 169% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2989.0 1977.66487455 151% => OK
No of words: 609.0 407.700716846 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90804597701 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.96768813016 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95866660215 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 351.0 212.727598566 165% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576354679803 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 915.3 618.680645161 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 25.0 9.59856630824 260% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 14.0 4.94265232975 283% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.1646380882 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9117647059 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9117647059 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14705882353 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.85842293907 389% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0647533287705 0.236089414692 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0200027051409 0.076458572812 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028413351862 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0431550801971 0.150856017488 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0122808352218 0.0645574589148 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 150.0 86.8835125448 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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