Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your response.
There are myriad opinions regarding the controversial question about whether to save earned money or to enjoy it. While some people espouse the belief that it is better to save money for some time in future, others adamantly oppose and criticize this idea, vehemently supporting the other side. Personally, I’m of the opinion that it is better to save your money when you earn it than to enjoy it. Two main reasons explored below will clarify my viewpoint.
To begin with, as awful as it seems, sometimes life puts people in severe financial predicaments. Moreover, these situations often happen suddenly. I believe that the one who saves his/her money can manage his/her financial issues better than ones who enjoy their money. That is because having money in your shelf makes you feel more confident during financial issues. One’s having money in his/her shelf is always safer than not to have it. It is evident, that the one who saved his/her money for such situations, may get out of them quicker and with less problems. Furthermore, he or she would less likely worry that their future life may be affected by that predicament.
On top of that, I think that saving money rather than enjoying it keeps one focused on his/her job. When one enjoys his money, he or she has to earn it again, facing the same stress on work he or she endured before enjoying. Hence, if one prefers to enjoy his or her money rather than save it, he or she has less likely a chance to stop this sequence of “earn – enjoy”. In addition, the one who saves his or her money does not have to face that amount of stress when life unexpectedly puts him or her in harsh situations, because they worry less on future life, as mentioned in the previous paragraph.
To capitulate, I’d like to reassert my position for the view that saving money rather than enjoying it is a better option. I concur, no one can grant an ideal answer to this question, but in the light of the reasons elaborated on, I feel urged to claim that saving money for future is better rather than enjoying it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...t is better to save money for some time in future, others adamantly oppose and criticize ...
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Line 3, column 558, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun problems is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...s, may get out of them quicker and with less problems. Furthermore, he or she would ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, while, as to, i feel, i think, in addition, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69209809264 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42962251815 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520435967302 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5389106978 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.294117647 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5882352941 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363757171648 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133038602976 0.076458572812 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10325825254 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263644426784 0.150856017488 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104847678193 0.0645574589148 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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