It is ture that creating profit is basic need of companies. Besides,they have some social responsibilities. I support to the idea because businesses should not have only focus on making money it also need to have some public responsibilities.
On one hand, I believe that making money is more beneficial for society. Whereas companies making more money so, they expand their business,which create more job opportunities for people. Moreover,if corporates have higher earing they will pay taxes. Therefore governments improve facilities like health care,swimming pool, gym,so on and develop infrastucture too.
On the other hand, i would like to describe that comapnies should be socially responsible with two main reasons. The first reason is that companies must be protect the environment because of companies have install their waste and discharging chemical into river. This is of the reason of global warming. In addition, companies are release thier poisonous gas in air without any safety. This is harmful for respiration. It cause air pollution and damage ozone layer because of this there is fear of destruction of planet.
To othe on is, to using money for charities and financial scholarships. It is not companies reputation but it can conribute better commnity. It will be very helpful for better future of the nation. For instance,ayska company provides financial scholarship for poor students in backward villages.
In conclusion, from my point of view however, making money is basic requirement to survivor companies. Although i believe that all companies should have some social duty for better community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42292490119 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09037832953 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600790513834 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3373212134 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2105263158 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3157894737 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192308437015 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569569254698 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831123868199 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120275250916 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104077194123 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.27 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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