Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic.
It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. (250 words)
Educating children is one of essential responsibilities for parents as well as teachers. It’s crucial to raise a child into a good individual in the society. There are numerous teaching methods; one of them is giving some punishment for the children. I do agree that opinion.
Some people think it is enough to tell someone what rules he/ she should be followed; Give he/ she more chances to modify the actions. However, children, at an early age, are too young and innocent to be aware of their behavior and take the adults’ advice immediately. Kids learn important lessons by punishment when they disobey the rules as well as do something inappropriate, especially dangerous things.
When we talk about in which ways an adult should guild a kid to have good manners, I don’t support that children are punished by violence, for example, beating one’s palms with a stick. Because those punishments tend to be violent, it may be physical or psychology harmful. There are some more gentle guiding ways I support. For instance, children who make mistakes aren’t allow to have pocket money, do their favorite hobbies or eat favorite food for a period of time, but help do some housework. Take my experience as an example, I used to run after my friends in the hallway for fun when I was in Public School. Unfortunately, one day, I tripped one of my friends up while I was running up and down stairs. She had a nasty bump on her head when falling down. After hearing this news form my teacher, my parents were so angry and punished me by having doing some housework, such as hung up the clothes and vacuumed the carpet for a month. I’ve never done it again since then. Moreover, being a volunteer to do something for charity is also a wise solution.
In conclusion, I agree with the idea the punishment is a way to teach children because of its effectiveness. However, parents should be wise while choosing an appropriate and suitable penalty to correct children’s behavior.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87755102041 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8657305343 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606413994169 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5316738996 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0526315789 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0526315789 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170989438398 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498323799187 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468069456072 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113673282037 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0105210584111 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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