Nowadays, computers are considered to be an essential part of life. Non-computer users are often excluded from their work and lives. I agree with that statement and prove that those people are at disadvantages if they could not get familiar with computers.
Non-computer users often have/encounter difficulties in work. It takes more time for them to deal with work matters. For example, a clerk who could not use computers may spend one or two hours editing a contact while another colleague only spends one and a half hour doing the same job with the aid of computers. In addition, they could not make long distance contacts in a short period of time because they do not use computers.
There are several disadvantages that non-computer users also experience in their normal life. First, they have limitations on access to worldwide information due to the fact that all sources of information now could be found on the internet. Second, an increasing number of social services are available online and one has to know how to use computers to utilize these services. For examples, people now can make transactions through an electronic medium without the use of checks or cash. Another example is that people can book train tickets via the websites of the train services. They do not need to go to train stations and buy tickets from the ticket boxes.
In short, that not know how to use computers is a disadvantage to some people. More time wasted on work, lack of access to worldwide information and social services are some of the disadvantages people could face in their work and normal life. Therefore studying computer use is a necessity for anybody in an open world today.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, in addition, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90559440559 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76526345749 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534965034965 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2426346593 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6875 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186069018622 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655660502354 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036108839256 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123183507782 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107020433797 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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